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Assessment for Unit 7: Writing the Open Argument Essay
Select the one best answer for each question.
1. [Skill: 2.B | Topic: 7.1] A student is writing an argument essay about the impact of artificial intelligence on the creative workforce. Which of the following versions of the thesis statement best uses a qualifier to create a defensible, nuanced claim?
2. [Skill: 7.A | Topic: 7.1] Read the following sentence from a student's draft on urban planning: 'Although high-density housing *often* creates more walkable neighborhoods, it can inadvertently strain local infrastructure if not accompanied by transit upgrades.' Which of the following best describes the function of the word 'often' in the sentence?
3. [Skill: 2.B | Topic: 7.1] Which of the following thesis statements most effectively presents an 'open' argument structure rather than a 'closed' list of reasons?
4. [Skill: 4.B | Topic: 7.1] A student wants to revise the following claim to make it more precise and defensible given the complexity of the issue: 'Censorship is never justified in a free society.' Which revision best utilizes qualifiers to create a nuanced argument?
5. Questions 1–4 refer to the passage below. (1) Advocates for the expansion of urban highways often argue that the personal automobile represents the pinnacle of American liberty. (2) They contend that the ability to travel anywhere, at any time, without reliance on a schedule, is a fundamental freedom that must be preserved through the widening of lanes and the construction of more parking. (3) It is true that the car offers a specific type of flexibility that a train or bus cannot match, particularly for those living in rural areas or needing to transport heavy loads. (4) To deny the convenience of a personal vehicle in these specific instances would be disingenuous. (5) However, in the context of a dense metropolis, this 'freedom' is increasingly illusory. (6) The liberty to drive is negated by the tyranny of traffic congestion. (7) When thousands exercise their freedom simultaneously, the result is gridlock—a collective paralysis where no one is free to move. (8) Furthermore, the argument that replacing street parking with bike lanes kills local business has been refuted by study after study. (9) Data consistently shows that pedestrians and cyclists spend more money at local shops than drivers do, simply because they are moving at a pace that allows them to notice and access these businesses. (10) By clinging to a car-centric model, we are not protecting freedom; we are subsidizing inefficiency and prioritizing the storage of private machinery over the movement of people. In sentences 3 and 4, the author concedes that personal vehicles offer flexibility primarily to
6. The author’s strategy of explicitly distinguishing between the 'theoretical' independence of driving and the 'actual' experience of gridlock serves to
7. The following questions are based on a draft of a student essay about the changing role of public libraries. (1) In an age where a universe of information can be accessed with a single swipe on a smartphone, some argue that the brick-and-mortar public library is an artifact of the past. (2) However, to view the library merely as a warehouse for books is to misunderstand its modern function. (3) Today’s libraries have transformed into dynamic community hubs that address a critical need: the digital divide. (4) While high-speed internet is a staple in many households, a significant portion of the population remains disconnected, relying on libraries for essential online access. (5) A 2021 study indicated that nearly one-third of households with incomes below 30,000 dollars do not own a smartphone. (6) Additionally, libraries offer quiet spaces for reading, which is hard to find in a noisy city. (7) Beyond mere access, libraries provide the guidance necessary to navigate the digital landscape. (8) In a world awash with "fake news," librarians act as information first responders, teaching patrons how to evaluate sources and verify facts. In sentence 6 (reproduced below), the writer is considering deleting the sentence to strengthen the line of reasoning. "Additionally, libraries offer quiet spaces for reading, which is hard to find in a noisy city." Should the writer keep or delete this sentence?
8. The writer wants to support the claim in sentence 8 (librarians as information first responders) with a concrete example. Which of the following pieces of evidence would best strengthen the argument?
9. The writer is considering replacing the general phrase "a significant portion of the population" in sentence 4 with the specific phrase "over 20 million American households." Which of the following best explains why this change would strengthen the line of reasoning?
10. The writer is reviewing the following sentence from the second paragraph of an essay arguing for the adoption of a four-day workweek: 'Research proves that every employee is more productive when they work fewer hours, so businesses will see immediate profit increases.' The writer wants to modify this claim to make it more defensible and accurate. Which version of the sentence best achieves this goal?
11. The writer is working on a paragraph arguing that a four-day workweek reduces burnout. However, the writer has encountered new evidence indicating that some employees report increased stress due to having to complete the same amount of work in fewer days. Which of the following adjustments to the line of reasoning would best incorporate this counterevidence while maintaining the writer's central argument?
12. In the conclusion of the essay, the writer wants to add a sentence that acknowledges the financial concerns of business owners regarding the transition to a four-day workweek. Which sentence best establishes a concession while pivoting back to support the main argument?
13. The writer is revising the thesis statement to make it more nuanced. Original Thesis: 'Mandating a four-day workweek is the only way to save the economy and cure the mental health crisis.' Revised Thesis: 'Implementing a four-day workweek in suitable industries offers a promising approach to revitalizing economic productivity and alleviating widespread workforce burnout.' What is the primary effect of this revision on the argument's defensibility?
14. The following questions are based on a draft of an essay about the role of handwriting in the digital age. The writer wants to revise sentence 1 (reproduced below) to provide a more engaging hook that establishes the specific context of the argument. 'In today’s world, keyboards are used for almost everything.' Which version of the sentence best accomplishes this goal?
15. The writer wants to revise sentence 3 (reproduced below) to create a defensible thesis that establishes a clear line of reasoning. 'However, cursive writing is important and should be kept in schools because it helps students learn better.' Which version of the sentence best accomplishes this goal?
16. The writer wants to revise the first sentence of the conclusion (reproduced below) to better synthesize the previous arguments about cognitive retention and motor skills, rather than merely summarizing them. 'In the end, typing is faster, but writing is better.' Which version of the sentence best accomplishes this goal?
17. The writer wants to revise the final sentence of the essay (reproduced below) to provide a sense of finality and explain the broader significance of the argument. 'If we stop writing by hand, we might lose a skill that is actually very useful for our brains.' Which version of the sentence best accomplishes this goal?
Answer all parts of each question. Answers must be in essay form. Outlines or lists alone are not acceptable.
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